luni, 6 octombrie 2014

 Benefits and Challenges of Students’ Internship in Moldovan Schools
        An internship is a method of on-the-job training when students in a profession have to put in practice the knowledge they acquired while studying at the University. Actually, the internship in Moldovan schools is the reflection of students'  knowledge while teaching the others where namely the sense of  responsibility and accuracy is checked. This training combines some benefits and certain challenges the students have to face.
       Gaining work experience is one of the benefits of the internship. Meeting, communicating and working with new teachers helps in getting wide experience in this domain. While teaching the others you develop your work potential and assume to be more responsible. Moreover, this internship develops some skills related to teaching such as : communication with the pupils and listening, which are very important in this profession.
      Eventually besides the andvantages there comes some challenges of the internship. One that troubles the new specialists in this domain is lack of time. While planning stages of the lesson and the activities, the time is drafted per each minute but when the lesson starts, there arrouses tiny problems or difficulties to be solved and it takes time. As a result, the majority of activities are left and only a half of what was scheduled is passed through. Furthermore, while explaining the new material during the lesson and taking into consideration the time limit, communication with pupils becomes poor. Thus, the interaction between pupils and teacher isn't productive and the expectations are not satisfied.
       In conclusion, the internship in Moldovan schools is both helpfull and challenging. It gives the opportunity to the young specialists to develop certain skills and abilities and also helps to overcome the drawbacks that are to be met on this way. Nevertheless, a positive thinking and hard work will help to succeed.
   
   
        

Un comentariu:

  1. 1st paragraph:
    - I'm not sure if the internship is a 'program'
    - 'students-beginners'!!!!!!!!!!!
    - I think the first sentence should be reformulated a bit
    - 'and' is it appropriately used in the second sentence?
    - there's no logical connection between the last sentence and the previous ones. 'Apart from this,' it does not make sense.

    2nd paragraph:
    - maybe just 'one of the benefits is...'
    - 'interfeering'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - 'helps in obtaining'!!!!!!!!!
    - 'as much experience as possible'!!!
    - 'increase the potential' = collocation???
    - you don't 'assume to be able...'
    - 'rehearsal of the future job' ?????????? metaphor?
    - 'listening them'??
    - what kind of results, I don't understand!

    3rd paragraph:
    - disadvantages do not 'come'!!!
    - WO in the second sentence and it's not about 'bothering'!!!!!!!!!!
    - 'whilst'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - no contractions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    - 'expectation + exceed' do collocate but they make no sense in your sentence
    - read the comments I made to Alina concerning 'time'

    4th paragraph:
    - 2nd sentence to be reformulated; 'encourage' is not the appropriate verb
    - 3rd sentence - it does not 'hint'!!!
    - 'on this way'!!!!!!!!
    - not 'escape' for sure!!! other word to be used!

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