Writing is a skill and a mean of putting down the thoughts by using language. It is both challenging and helpfull especially for students who are teachers to be. It envolves student's attention, memory and hard working which are the most important tools to succeed. Within the writing tasks, there should be followed some rules of scheming, analysing and rewriting the drafts. Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I think this course will be based on improving our writing skills by using of different methods, topics and vocabulary due to which the tasks will be interesting. It will help us to avoid errors in puntuation, grammar and spelling. Moreover, it will increase the interest in students through motivation. I strongly believe that this course will improve on my writing skills.
Dear Cristina,
RăspundețiȘtergereI like your paragraph the most. I think it is truly interesting. You managed to connect all your ideas into a whole. So well done!
Yours truly,
Alina
Thank you, Alina very much you had time to read and comment...I hope so....
ȘtergereCristina not bad, but there's always room for improvement.
RăspundețiȘtergere1) What's the TS? Where is it?
2) What was the purpose of your paragraph to describe what writing is in general or to state your expectations? In a longer paper, you might include an introductory paragraph stating what writing is in general, but in this case you were asked to write one paragraph on a specific issue which should be developed in the paragraph.
2) It's unclear what you wanted to say in 'It is both challenging and helpfull'
3) How do you know that they are ' the most important tools' (try to adoid superlatives), and are they 'tools'? But once again, does this sentence develop the TS?
4) Please reformulate 'I think this course will be based on improving our writing skills by using of different methods, topics and vocabulary due to which the tasks will be interesting.' it is not clear what you want to say.
5) ' it will increase the interest in students through motivation' also not clear
6) So there's a shift from students in general to 'us' students and at the end to 'I'.
7) Be also attentive to the use of prepositions. Please double check.
Good luck :)
Oh My God!!! so many mistakes....I failed...((
ȘtergereWhen I read what you mentioned, I realized that almost everything is wrong....
I can't explain why it is so bad, but may be because this is the first piece of writing done this year...I hope, in future it will get better.
Thank you for pointing on my BIG mistakes!
Dear Cristina, You are not the one who failed!
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