A new course in English is always eagerly awaited and arouses a lot of expectations. First of all, as it is English it is already an interesting and an important course for me. Secondly, if it deals with Academic Writing, I hope it will increase my writing skills, which is my high point. I also guess the course will be based on certain rules (grammatical, syntactical, stylistical) to be followed in order to achieve the set goal. Moreover, I suppose there won't be as many difficulties as I think because of the teacher's method of teaching and the way she motivates me to work. Finally,I strongly believe, after all, my pieces of writing will be coherent, correct and the ideas will be arranged thoughtfully.
Dear Cristina,
RăspundețiȘtergereVery good! I like your paragraph! It is better now! You have worked more and your sentences are different. I think your paragraph is coherent. You also used different connectors which helped you to link one idea to another. You highlighted your TS. How does the teacher motivate you???? ))) You have a high point, this is good. I consider in the 3rd sentence it will sound better this variant: "Secondly, [as] it deals with Academic writing..." However it is not so important I believe. Go on and you will achieve absolutely your set goal! Have a nice week!
Kind wishes,
Alina
Dear Cristina, I would delete 'is always eagerly awaited and' and just say 'A new course in English always arouses a lot of expectations'
RăspundețiȘtergere- Are you sure you should not use the preposition 'in' before 'English'?
- I would use 'and' before 'I hope it will increase my writing skills'. Be careful 'increase' or maybe something else? Can the writing skills be increased?
- 'my high point' ??? maybe 'my weak point'?
- 'I also guess the course will be based on' - very confusing. Maybe the course will deal with....
- 'the set goal' ??????
- 'as many difficulties' maybe 'so many difficulties'???
- 'I think because of the teacher's method of teaching and the way she motivates me to work.' should be rewritten
- 'Finally,I strongly believe, after all,' too redundant, I'm afraid.
- 'thoughtfully' ?????
But I have seen some improvement. It's a first step